Here in 1/2B, we love writing! This week we watched a music video for Coldplay's song, Strawberry Swing. Rylee, the prep teacher told us about it and we watched it on the interactive whiteboard. It is a chalk-mation and it is wonderful.
After we'd watched it we sat down and did some lightning writing about it. Then, today, we all sat down together and began writing the story of the Superhero and the Strawberry Princess. We weren't going to post it til it was finished but we're really excited so we thought we'd share what we've got so far.
The Superhero and the Strawberry Princess
It was another beautiful sunrise. The sleepy man lay in bed. “Ahhhhhh,” he yawned. The sky was pink and orange and yellow like fireworks. It looked like it was going to be a lovely day. He trotted downstairs in his slippers and sat at the table to eat a hearty, healthy breakfast of whole fish which he wolfed down in one gulp. Yum! *
All of a sudden he heard a shriek. “ HELP!” He grabbed his trusty super-telescope and spied a strawberry princess, in desperate trouble. She was tied up on a pencil, in a teacup which was filling with water. She was going to drown! The man’s pyjamas burst off him and underneath .....duh da da duh...he was a super hero in a rainbow coloured superhero suit!
The superhero flew out the window to save the strawberry princess. He flew up to the atmosphere, up where the air is clear, to get a better view. She was trapped in the Taj Mahal by the giant evil squirrel who wanted her to be his bride. * Now that our brave hero knew where she was, he swept down through the clouds, back to earth, his larva-coloured cape streaming behind him. As he did so, he was halted in his tracks. The evil squirrel appeared from behind a cloud, with a huge arrow gun.
Shewww, sheeeew, sheew! The arrows zoomed and zipped past his ears but luckily, just in time, he dodged them all. Shewww, sheeeew, sheew! The arrows kept firing, the gun was unstoppable! The hero whipped out his rainbow coloured, unbreakable umbrella which shielded him from the swarm of deadly arrows. The evil, giant squirrel was fed up so he snatched up his giant scissors and snipped the hero’s cape like it was paper.
Down, down, down fell the superhero, down through the clouds, down through the mist, down through the dark and gloomy squares of the city windows. Little kids looked through the windows with amazement. Our quick thinking hero flipped his umbrella and parachuted gently down until, SPLASH! He plunged into the ocean. His umbrella became a little boat. He sat there, lonely and wet, wondering what to do next.
Suddenly... a giant, evil lion catfish swam sneakily up behind him and snapped him up whole with one giant gulp.