Friday, 14 October 2011

Why we love holidays!


 This week,we made a mini book each (Gareth made a poster instead). They were all called "Why I love Holidays" because we were writing about our holidays. Lauren got the idea from a mini book about birds that she was given as a gift. She thought it would be fun to make our own little books about our interesting holidays. First we did a brainstorm on a giant piece of paper, all about our holidays. After a little time had passed we wrote our rough drafts of our mini books on lined paper. We edited our writing with a critical friend and jazzed it up!







When our writing was the best we could make it, we folded a blankety-blank piece of paper in a special way (Lauren helped us to fold it into eighths) to make our little book. To keep our writing neat, we ruled guide-lines lightly with a grey-lead pencil. When the books were finished we read them to each other. They have beautiful, carefully-drawn illustrations and the writing is magnificent.

Here are some quotes from our books:

I love seeing horse-drawn carriages. Teagan

I watched Mum play plants vs zombies. Gareth

I love going to bed at 7:30 and waking up at 7:30. Evie

I love watching kangaroos with joeys, all day!  Nina






I love getting up at 12:00 for a midnight feast. Lucy

I love going to see my grandpa's, sister's dog. Ilya

I love going to Apollo Bay. Clarrie

I loved going to the beach and boogie boarding. Ella

I loved going to my soccer presentation and eating an egg and bacon roll. Sam

I love going up and down the stairs. Max H. 
I love going to my friend's house all day and staying for dinner. Isaac

I loved going to the movies. Max R.
I love going to Gough's Bay and getting lost. Isabel

I love riding in David's Big White Bus! Olivia

I loved going to the wedding. Lulu

I love Romola coming and doing a silly dance with me and my sister. Mia






I love going to Ceres and having yummy honeycomb coated in chocolate. Romola

I love playing with my lego. Josh

I loved going to my uncle's house to watch the grand final. Felix

I loved going on an undergound gold mine tour. Aidan

I love playing with my friends. Daniel